Cover letter for a job

Which parts sound too informal? Replace them with an item from the list below.

FORMAL OPTIONS:

-extensively with young adults 

-respect my leadership abilities

-I find it easy

-very interested in

-have a strong understanding of

-Enclosed please find 

.look forward to hearing

-considerable

-many of the relevant qualifications

-have traveled widely

-Mrs. Johnson

-Sincerely,

-in this newspaper 

-feel

-organizing a variety of activities

-establish a good working relationship

 

June 20th, 2016

Guanajuato, Gto.

Lucia Johnson

Juarez Street 304

Dear Lucia,

I am applying for the position of English teacher which I saw advertised somewhere recently. Here´s my resume. I guess I have just above everything needed for this job. I have worked lots with young students, doing all kinds of stuff. They generally do what I tell them, and we manage to have a great time together. Having studied psychology and education in college, I know quite a bit about the behavior of students. I am really into languages and have lots of experience organizing cultural events. I am a very practical person, easygoing, and it´s no problem for me to make friends. I´ve been all over the place and enjoy meeting new people.

I can´t wait to hear from you. 

Your friend,

Kennia Yong

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